tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post8765598361402709189..comments2023-09-11T05:01:35.483-07:00Comments on writercize: Meteoric Metaphors - writercize #112Alanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07507063858936159161noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post-33537242743796470652011-09-30T13:07:26.057-07:002011-09-30T13:07:26.057-07:00Misha - Thanks for the feedback! Nothing on this ...Misha - Thanks for the feedback! Nothing on this site is meant to prepare a manuscript or query; it's just writing exercises to get the flow going and look at writing with new eyes each time ... and have a little fun! But, it's always good to put that voice of reason out there when it comes to publishing. :) <br /><br />Jolene - Welcome!! Good to have you here. Hope you enjoy it!<br /><br />Tara - love it! You got all the seasons in one full sweep. :) Always a pleasure to read your take!Alanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07507063858936159161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post-52694920388192436332011-09-30T12:55:45.679-07:002011-09-30T12:55:45.679-07:00*cough* This not something I'd strongly sugges...*cough* This not something I'd strongly suggest in manuscripts that go in for queries. <br /><br />I've seen more than one agent and editor who say that that's a big no-no. Of course, nothing prevents one from doing it, assuming that you do it well enough to leave any other work with the same weather-matches-emotion scenes in the dust...Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post-32170761145784626082011-09-29T18:10:19.336-07:002011-09-29T18:10:19.336-07:00After an exciting spring of electrifying court cas...After an exciting spring of electrifying court cases and a whirlwind chase to finally nab his wife, Cooper had a blissfully hot summer of a marriage. Like a honeymoon in the tropics that lasted two years until the dismal cold rain of fall finally descended, ripping his wife away. His sadness lingered and festered as he hibernated away from the cold, snowy winter. A new case on the horizon may bring a new spring flower with warmer days to melt the ice in his heart.<br /><br />that was fun!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post-48632306059346047192011-09-29T00:41:22.551-07:002011-09-29T00:41:22.551-07:00How did I miss this blog??? I am so happy to be he...How did I miss this blog??? I am so happy to be here!!!! *rushes off to explore the site*www.jolenestockman.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11843017388657814151noreply@blogger.com