tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post1437805427299378679..comments2023-09-11T05:01:35.483-07:00Comments on writercize: Tea Time Fiction - writercize #72Alanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07507063858936159161noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post-79069707692755177752011-07-15T18:42:23.571-07:002011-07-15T18:42:23.571-07:00This is a wonderful and sweet story! You are a ver...This is a wonderful and sweet story! You are a very talented writer! My favorite bits -<br /><i>sucking in energy from the power cord</i> - a very different way of describing something so mundane. <br /><i>as the black of the tea swirled and danced with the white of the cream until they settled into a monochrome tawny color.</i> - brought me right there with Jane as if I was looking through her eyes.<br /><i>her voice floated in the air like a butterfly suspended between them, light and airy and somehow beautiful and delicate.</i> - such beautiful and vivid imagery!Briannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581532070734685757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post-51099553844462961052011-06-23T10:51:59.490-07:002011-06-23T10:51:59.490-07:00I just drank some chai tea. Great idea for a writi...I just drank some chai tea. Great idea for a writing exercise.<br /><br />I just found you blog! As a teacher, I look forward to trying some of these exercises with my students. Thanks!<br /><br />-Miss GOP<br />www.thewritingapprentice.comMiss Good on Paperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12322651575015033263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5573858483799418922.post-75975832373336755472011-06-23T00:19:59.727-07:002011-06-23T00:19:59.727-07:00That's an idea. :-DThat's an idea. :-DMisha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.com